My enemy

[Seahorse]

Hate is such
A fragile thing
To cultivate
I hate you pure
And simple
With a purpose
So refined
Like a knife
Sharpened to diamond
Point
Your image fills my mind
It is a tender flower of dislike
That I felt
When I first met you
My enemy
My only regret
Is murder is not legal
Cause I would run you
Through
With knives
And bombs
And poison
If you only knew.
I hate you with a precise
Emotion.
With every word you say.
I wish you dead with such devotion.
I just want you to pay.

[X x K e l Z x X]

I like the uniqueness of this, very good and true.

[John Barnett]

Great piece you have here, I like it, very powerful

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

i like your choice of line break in this piece. thanks for sharing it.

[Seth]

This is totally awesome. Love the impact and flow of this, absolutely spell-binding and consuming... The formatting is indeed, terrific.
Utterly, Fascinating.

[_black phoenix_]

It is a tender flower of dislike
That I felt
When I first met you

i especially enjoyed those three lines. well put.

a very enjoyable piece of writing, seahorse.. youve got an intreguing style.

[AnSidhe]

Very good. I really liked this one.