Veins

[A2sHaTo]

Look at my veins,
they're bursting with blood.
They're swollen and tortured,
only my razor can cure their hurt.

With my eyes shut tight,
the blood keeps pumping.
I feel each and every heartbeat,
how painful is the pace.

Stop the beats,
please stop the beats..
Cut all the veins,
let the blood spill out..

Cut all the veins,
please cut them deep..
Stay by my side,
and bleed me dry..

It's getting worse with each passing moment,
my head is throbbing with the pulse.
That pulse..
How it's killing me so slowly..

Keep me restrained,
don't untie me just yet.
Fill my veins with morphine,
sedate me so I can sleep..

Stop the beats...
please stop the beats..
Narcotize me,
just somehow soothe the pain..

Cut all the veins,
please cut them deep...
Don't walk away just yet,
don't let me die alone..

The pulsing is slower,
the poison works so nicely.
I'm releasing myself into it,
into another dream.

Look at my veins,
they're no longer bursting..
They're subjected to the medication,
and I'm slowly slipping into sleep.

The beats have stopped,
the pulsating beats..
The blood is thined down,
and the veins remain in a calm state.

The veins are cut,
the veins are cut deep..
You're still by my side,
still sympathizing with me..

[Seth]

Stunning, it leaves me just about breathless.
Love the wording, flow and story here...
Fascinating write.

[_black phoenix_]

exceptional work, a2shato. the desperation and need in this piece bleed through strong. you have a very enjoyable style.. i will need to take a look at the rest of the writing you have posted here.

[A2sHaTo]

Seth said:

Stunning, it leaves me just about breathless.
Love the wording, flow and story here...
Fascinating write.

*Smiles* Thank you again

[A2sHaTo]

leash said:

exceptional work, a2shato. the desperation and need in this piece bleed through strong. you have a very enjoyable style.. i will need to take a look at the rest of the writing you have posted here.

Thank you as well! Comments like these are what keep me writing.

[Mwalvbk]

Great work, this is very good.

EF

[QueenofDarkness]

Very nice piece. I loved the exceptional flow of the hurt and feeling of being bound. Thanks for this. Look forward to reading more.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

this was rhythmically hypnotising - i found myself tapping along, though the pace changed a bit here and there... kinda like a vein pumping blood, heh!

i really enjoyed this piece, keep it up!

[AnSidhe]

Very heart-felt. I just love your style. I love this poem, you did pretty good.