UNTITLED

[QueenofDarkness]

BONFIRES DART THE ROLLING HILLSIDES
FIGURES DANCE AROUND AND 'ROUND
TO DRUMS THAT PULSE
IN THE ECHOES OF DARKNESS
MOVING TO THE PAGAN SOUND.
SOMEWHERE IN A HIDDEN MEMORY
IMAGES FLOAT BEFORE MY EYES
OF A HOLY NIGHT
THAT MARKS WHERE THE OLD YEAR
IT PASSES BY.
I CAN SEE THE LIGHT
IN THE DISTANCE
TREMBLING IN THE DARK CLOAK OF NIGHT
CANDLES AND LANTERNS ARE DANCING...
DANCING...
IN THE MOON OF ALL SOUL'S NIGHT.

[::..::FoX::..::]

Great work Queen, this is nice!

Fox

[_black phoenix_]

i really liked the mood of this piece.. you set up the atmosphere with your imagery quite well. vivid.

THAT MARKS WHERE THE OLD YEAR
IT PASSES BY.

it may sound better if you take "it" out of that second line there. unless there should be a period at the end of the first line and i am reading it wrong?

stunning work. i enjoyed this greatly.

[nevadasky]

WOW, queen,

Great passage to the moment with eloquent word painting; you took me there. loved this!

nevadasky ;D

[QueenofDarkness]

Actually I should have posted this in the songs and lyrics b/c it is the lyrics to a song.

[Seth]

Well then, stellar lyrics,
queen.
Awesome wording and flow,
really captivates the reader.