Dancing With Vampires

[QueenofDarkness]

We walked all night
Cooled by the fires
Not a single sight
Except the dancing vampires
Call it crazy
But I really love the moon
Call me lazy
But I really have to sleep soon
Its the irony
That laughs so loud
When I believe
The stone throwing crowd
I'll stay up
Never getting tired
Living an unbelievable sight
Dancing with vampires
My friends carry torches and old flames
They wish on love
We never play it tame
There's no more fun
To think of
When we're building our bonfires
While playing in the cemetary
Dancing with vampires
Life is so short
So let's be merry
Let's have fun
We won't stop dancing
Until we see the sun.

[Alex'z Death Chic]

made me smile... ;D

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

I love this...you had me hooked at the title!

My friends carry torches and old flames
They wish on love

Great work, those lines were fantastic.

Cheers,
rinna

[_black phoenix_]

Alex'z said:

made me smile... ;D

definitely.

i love the flow of this piece.. your rhythm in the first half of the poem is just so natural.

nicely put together, queenofdarkness. i enjoyed it much.