Angel

[QueenofDarkness]

A white rose brought to me
The blackness to a close
My sign of purity
I close my eyes
All I can see
The poor soul who dies
Calling to me
I came to them
Helped them on their way
I look past their sins
This isn't judgement day
I take them to the line
Between heaven and hell
Time will be seen
As to where they will dwell
I go back again
Rose in hand
Forgiven of sin in demand
Because the world is dim
My ever-lit candle always glowing
The souls so easy to handle
But their patience are slowing
When there is darkness
I am the light
An unwelcome spark
In the dead of night
Some fear me
I've come on their last day
Others cheer me
They see I light the way
I'm beautiful
I'm ugly
I'm musical
I'm unworldly
My robes white and flowing
I'm a sight bold and glowing
My dress black
My grip tight
Always on your back
You want to fight
I'm kind in my ways
I'm in soul and mind
To you I'm just a daze
For you I cry
When you turn pale and die
I would not leave you in the abyss to dangle
I'm death's angel

[alostandbrokensoul]

I would not leave you in the abyss to dangle
I'm death's angel

These were my favorites this is really good.

[T.J. Barber]

I agree with you Tiffany. Those two stanzas were the most impacting and I enjoyed this piece very much. Great job on this one...

TJ

[Seth]

When there is darkness
I am the light
An unwelcome spark
In the dead of night

These were my favorite lines, don't know why,
they just seemed so unique and catching.
Wonderful write, really portrays a lot of imagery
and emotion, and feeling. Awesome.

I would not leave you in the abyss to dangle
I'm death's angel

These closing lines really did bring the piece together, and left quite an intriguing impact. Wonderful write.

[AnSidhe]

Absolutely beautiful. Very well written.