murderer

[alostandbrokensoul]

The dead have risen for revenge
I am not a killer you will see
that death is nothing more
that extacy to me.

I did what I did
Im innocent I plead
but for my intoxicants
someone had to bleed

I get high off of death
the pain that they feel
the blood that is spilt
the pleas that are so real

Im not a murderer
as you can see
cause no one will know
when you go up missing.

[T.J. Barber]

Great write girl. I enjoyed this pieve very much. It was sort of creepy in it's own way but totally awesome as well....

TJ

[Dreamcatcher]

Totally dark and frieghtening. Your use of words painted a scary picture....Meg

[Seth]

I did what I did
Im innocent I plead
but for my intoxicants
someone had to bleed

Wow, I'm stunned by its beautiful magnificence.
Stellar imagery and wording, the telling
just brings the whole piece to life.
Awesome write.

[AnSidhe]

It's good. But the last bit's rhyme scheme was kind of off, but don't change it; the poem was good anyway. Good job.