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Post by haggardlilelf on Jun 30, 2004 18:20:36 GMT -5
Follow me into the asylum And let darkness consume you. Build your lonely walls. If those walls could talk, What would they say? Dont think of escape, Theres no hope for you. Youll sit here and rot until darkness seeps in, Overruns, And turns your day to night, Your faith to doubt, Your hope to fear. And soon you will hope to fear, Because it is the only emotion you you will ever feel again. Fear not my darling, My sweet, My dear. Your black angel is here.
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Post by angel on Jun 30, 2004 22:11:26 GMT -5
ooooh this is kinda creepy. I really like the originality of this
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Post by desecration on Jul 20, 2004 23:40:15 GMT -5
i really like this. nice write. it reminds me of a lot of people that i know. keep up the good work.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 21, 2004 5:11:41 GMT -5
such an emotive write...looking forward to more! x r x
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 22, 2004 19:18:00 GMT -5
Strong ending. I enjoyed that very much. This piece was done quite well the whole way through.. Keep up the good work.
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