NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Nov 16, 2004 23:35:03 GMT -5
Although I shall have gone so very far wandered off to a different life somewhere in the distance
there are things I want for you to know
That I will be there for you when the time comes that you see that I will still love you
when the dark times come when all seems down and dreary you can still call just to hear that the love I hold for you remains
that someone will always hold you in thier heart
the miles may seem like they are just to far yet true love knows no distance
the change has been so quiet never spoken here out loud life brings change with each and every breath
seasons change ideas shift situations become so different yet my love stands strong and true
we all change so often in our world we hide our lives in talk yet is is the special joys we share with our hearts that last in memory of how good our souls are
you I will remember for my love for you never who you were
my life belonged to you for a time my heart always shall
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 18, 2004 6:18:52 GMT -5
seasons change ideas shift situations become so different yet my love stands strong and true you write with so much truth, Nevermore. the bittersweet is your niche, well done.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:02:15 GMT -5
my life belonged to you for a time my heart always shall
Yes, I definately agree. Utterly breathtaking and gorgeous wording here, you've expressed such pain and melancholy well-excellently in fact. My soul tears over this, very powerful write.
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