Boredom in Hong Kong

[Alex'z Death Chic]

I was at the airport going home from Indonesia... I had some spare time so I wrote something...

The cloak of night has been thrown
over a city of lights, I find that I'm alone
no melody to soothe my uneasiness
beneath the overwhelming darkness
lack of will has grabbed me whole
eating up what's left of my soul
and as I succumb fully to the abyss
I realized there was nothing in this world I'd miss


stupid ending i know... but i had to board the plane haha

[alostandbrokensoul]

Great poem and actually I rather liked the ending. Keep it up

[Seth]

The ending was wonderful as was the piece. So compelling, intriguing and stellar (that's a new word from me) wording.
Loved this very much.

[Mikepoet]

Sounded like a last lines before the highjacking..glad it did not happen..we can still enjoy your future poetry.. ;D

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

ADC,

well it's been a while, eh? i thought the ending was great, it came from left field and gave the poem some added spunk. i liked it.

x r x