Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 8, 2004 12:34:05 GMT -5
Nightmare
Screaming between the twists and turns of sheet. Lost where life and reality meet. The nightmares are fragile, pale, and thin. Poison is sick and lost within. The crawling itches across my back. I'm ready this time for the attack. The barrage of feet and shattered thought, Things I rememberd and those forgot. They stitch their webs with crystal thread, And all those looks I've come to dread, Spun together in clear fine grace. Each spider politely takes his place For the dance and weaving of the mind, From the whore's perspective, what they find Is to be exploited and enscribed bold. Judgements written and secrets told. She wakes up screaming in fine thin sweat. The looks they gave, she'll now regret.
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jun 21, 2004 21:26:28 GMT -5
I read this over a few times because I really enjoyed this poem
Spun together in clear fine grace. Each spider politely takes his place I loved these two lines the best
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 26, 2004 7:01:03 GMT -5
i love this. x r x
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jun 26, 2004 23:59:38 GMT -5
Wow. I'm utterly speechless over this write... Incredible and simply awesome...
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
Posts: 222
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 29, 2004 10:43:19 GMT -5
thank you! i'm glad you all liked it. first poem in like a month...
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 22, 2004 19:30:57 GMT -5
Beautiful! This piece was magnificent, dear Eclipse. You have quite a way with words.. Very natural flow.
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