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Post by Burning Innocence on May 8, 2004 10:48:14 GMT -5
the tremors shake my already split foundation bold and true I've tried to remain words that don't fit you reality fades along with the distant sun like the disappearing dream I try to escape to I held you once, close to my heart high on pedestal wings tormented yet fighting I tear at your flesh blood pours slowly, trickling down oh to taste your whole screaming in a sound proof box wondering if this fight would last bringing to my brink of sanity your salty flesh fresh from my nails spoonfed cattle lies the same sugar coated propaganda never what I expected can't see through shattered dreams instead the pieces lie at my feet I grin with murderous delight as my blade scrapes against the skin the flames burn at my already blackened heart I tremble thinking you cared wiping the bloody tears I stab at the shame you've caused now you lie before me, exposed to the world dead
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 8, 2004 22:26:48 GMT -5
wow... im speechless... just... WOW.. I love the ending. I love the whole thing... WOW... just wow...
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Post by Burning Innocence on May 9, 2004 7:08:07 GMT -5
lol...hey thanks! ;D I had to vent and this came out...lol...it gave KG the creeps when he read it...
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 12, 2004 0:54:51 GMT -5
this was fantastic poetry, you captured a moment exceptionally well...
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