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Post by T.J. Barber on May 5, 2004 16:22:17 GMT -5
"The Void"
This piece was one of my brain twisters. I have a slite nack for psycho babble and thought this one to be mind prevoking and thought rendering.
The Void
Imagine if you will....an empty hall with only doors. Each door opens to reveal another hall with nothing but doors. Each door of each hall reveals yet another and another. You slowly start to slump as your heart starts to quicken and your mind race. You'll never get out of this bright white maze. The light starts to hurt your eyes and the walls start to close in. You start to panic and cry red tears as your mind starts to break.
The flows to your brain and your eyes turn red. It runs from your sockets like water through pockets. And you cannot see ahead.
You rip the hair from your head and scream with fear and ultimate dread. You'll lose yourself and then be ....
Then you turn around and see one black door. The one that was there the whole time. You were just to crazed to see it. The light tore at your eyes so you could not focus it in. You open the door and step inside.. The room is dark, black, and cold. But your happy ....it's atleast a change of scenery......
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Post by John Barnett on May 6, 2004 13:25:51 GMT -5
Interesting, I'm not really sure where it was meant to go, but it was very different.
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Post by T.J. Barber on May 6, 2004 15:16:10 GMT -5
Me either....i'm not sure where most of my work is aimed but...there it is anyway....
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Post by John Barnett on May 6, 2004 18:44:52 GMT -5
it's great that we are writing again, it's been a long slump for me
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 2:52:52 GMT -5
dmw, wow i really really love this! to me, it represents a transition from one phase of my life with no way out (leaving home) into a completely new hell (my relationship with a guy who became my rapist)which seems like heaven for the time being but it's something crazier. this was great i think it could expand into something mindblowing. x rinna x ps. don't worry i'm having a HUGE writers block phase right now
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