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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...

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SCREAM Nov 9, 2004 19:13:19 GMT -5

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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 9, 2004 19:13:19 GMT -5

i cant focus...on the simple pain
the pain that you left in my heart
i wanted you so bad, and you said no
AND I CRIED, cried the night
and you luaghed, luaghed away
luaghed away my simple pain
and i tried to obtain my dignity
from your evil clutches on me
AND I SCREAM- TRYING TO RELEASE IT
AND I SCREAM-TRYING TO BREATHE
AND I WANT TO FEEL MY SELF AGAIN
i cant seem to focus on my pain
the pain you left torn in me

I am lonely, truly lonely...but dont pity me...i made this choice, i must now suffer for it...wanna join me?

FoolyCoolyKiddo Novice As your slidding down the banister of life, remember me as the splinter in your crack. Posts: 3	SCREAM Nov 10, 2004 21:19:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by FoolyCoolyKiddo on Nov 10, 2004 21:19:28 GMT -5 Very strong words, pretty good writing! I can sence it coming from the heart...very very sympathetic for the person getting this torture...Vengence against the laughing stock!!!
	Go ahead think about tomorrow, yesterday has allready been forgotten, today is now.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	SCREAM Nov 16, 2004 5:36:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 16, 2004 5:36:22 GMT -5 i love a fury-driven write. thanks for sharing!
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	SCREAM Nov 21, 2004 17:04:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:04:15 GMT -5 As do I. Amazing and well related write, the emotion and expressions really pull you in and elevate the anger and bitter-pain inside... Wonderfully written.
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 9, 2004 19:13:19 GMT -5

Post by FoolyCoolyKiddo on Nov 10, 2004 21:19:28 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 16, 2004 5:36:22 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:04:15 GMT -5