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spiders
Apr 28, 2004 22:43:37 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:43:37 GMT -5
***for bree***
i can't see a thing it's dark out tonight how long have you played hostage in his deadly web? in his mass grave? everyone he touches dies where are you? you have to help me just a sign you're alright i scramble furiously wildly blindly to protect you to save you before he sinks his fangs again
and everyone you know transforms into free, majestic creatures while you are stuck in time his silky thread so binding you can't turn away you can't think if i am too late you may deform unable to be as breathtaking as you are as you were as you should be
WHERE ARE YOU?! don't let him devour you there's too much for you to do
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spiders
May 4, 2004 10:51:22 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:51:22 GMT -5
very cool piece...for a while i thought you were talking about vampires...i like the description of a net..good job!
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spiders
May 4, 2004 18:34:27 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:34:27 GMT -5
brt, thanks...vampires, i had to read it again, yeah i see that too! oop! thanks for reading! x rinna x
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Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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spiders
May 4, 2004 18:40:12 GMT -5
Post by Horn on May 4, 2004 18:40:12 GMT -5
I like this one... I smell some symbolism... I concur with kris... gj!
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spiders
May 4, 2004 18:48:02 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:48:02 GMT -5
horn, there's some pretty evil folk out there. this was my st christopher for bree. thanks for reading. x rinna x
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