Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
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Post by Horn on Apr 27, 2004 5:26:58 GMT -5
The Darkness The darkness envelops all, It is so tempting to be sucked into, Everyone seems to be going there, Falling into the abyss… Devils and demons accompany you, The dark, fiery inferno is all around, It is hard not to be sucked in, But I must use all my strength and will To never give in
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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 2, 2004 22:20:30 GMT -5
wheee!, I loved it!
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Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 11:02:23 GMT -5
sweet...i really like this piece...it is easy to fall into the darkness..great write!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 2:56:08 GMT -5
horn, every time i come on here you've got something better than the last you've written! sensing poetic growth spurt! fantastic, really loved it! x rinna x
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Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Post by Horn on Jul 21, 2004 11:59:02 GMT -5
Thanks guys
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 22, 2004 18:38:34 GMT -5
it is easy to fall into the darkness.. Ah yes, but once you are here, it is marvelous..
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