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Post by LouiZe on Apr 20, 2004 11:43:44 GMT -5
Funny how his fist matched so well with all the contours of her body. Strange how the walls cradled her when she was flung at them so violently. Funny how the floor loved her When she lie on it crying. Strange how her body became so tainted by his shadows. Funny how the only light she ever saw was the twisted shining of his eye. Strange how her loving smile was enough to make him beat her. Funny how she took the pain like she had never lived without it. Strange how her own mother could only watch when he abused her. Funny how her only comfort Came from a blade upon on her skin. Strange how the only warmth knew Was her blood as it ran to the ground. Funny how she lived on faith in God And the hope God would let her die. Strange how her god heard her And answered all her prayers. Funny how she smiled as he dealt that fatal blow. Strange that years of suffering Came to a halt in just one moment Funny how he never cried Or cared for his lost daughter Strange how she is now protected By a 6ft layer of dirt and stone. Funny how her only beauty is a single flower as it frowns above. Strange that it was placed here By a girl she didn’t know. Funny how someone should choose A “forget-me-not” and place it where she lie. Strange how those words Act as her final wish Forget-me-not….
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Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 20, 2004 22:06:20 GMT -5
Funny how some people treat others isn't it?
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Post by LouiZe on Apr 23, 2004 11:55:20 GMT -5
trust me.....i know
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 1:16:42 GMT -5
louize, this was fantastic! love the use of FUNNY and STRANGE, i don't believe it was overdone, which tends to happen sometimes, it was very very effective. enjoyed the read! x rinna x
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Post by Dreamcatcher on Oct 30, 2004 7:54:30 GMT -5
Truely an amazing write on abuse. Your words painted a bleak picture of a horror many of us do not know. Excellent work....Meg
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