FoolyCoolyKiddo
Novice
As your slidding down the banister of life, remember me as the splinter in your crack.
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Post by FoolyCoolyKiddo on Nov 8, 2004 11:22:02 GMT -5
My ass is cold from sitting on the floor. The love I once had, is with me no more. Someone else has stolen her heart. Mine is cold and torn apart. One day we will be reunited it is true! My ass will be warm again, all because of you.  |
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FoolyCoolyKiddo
Novice
As your slidding down the banister of life, remember me as the splinter in your crack.
Posts: 3
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Post by FoolyCoolyKiddo on Nov 8, 2004 11:42:41 GMT -5
I'm sorry...This poem is inspired by my ex, she was my everything and i still love her!
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 8, 2004 15:41:09 GMT -5
lets see...you seem to like to talk about your ass and others asses...the poem, the banister of life...hmm, i think your an ass man  |
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Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 9, 2004 7:54:51 GMT -5
and I think we need to limit the use of the word ass.....just a little how bout it? Interesting poem though...thought it was...well.....something.......
TJ
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Nov 9, 2004 12:46:21 GMT -5
*small applause* I love this, very nice and uh... Nicely worded. simple, short and real. Love the closing line very much.  |
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Nov 12, 2004 23:49:09 GMT -5
lol... this made me smile... I dunno if this was made to be silly but that's the word that Id use to describe this... "my ass will be warm again, all because of you" cute...
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 16, 2004 5:26:27 GMT -5
this made me laugh, i'm not sure if that was the desired effect. i enjoyed it, thanks for sharing!
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