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Fear.
Apr 16, 2004 3:25:26 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 16, 2004 3:25:26 GMT -5
Fear.
Citrus sharpness of orange peel under fingernails, the pungence that moves on light feet, stinging fresh gashes cut in the skin, as blood smudged into dirty walls, and crushed onion rasps the tongue. A shapeless form. A figure constantly lurking behind you, a flicker from the corner of the eye, a movement gone unseen, on the edge of sight. The billowing curtains in the wind of a silent movie, beheld by shrouded figures in a vague light, A distant scream muffled into a pillow, the suffocating silences, soundless cries, gagged words, suppressed screams. A strangers eye peering from a familiar form, as fear lays down to die.
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Fear.
Apr 17, 2004 19:52:54 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 19:52:54 GMT -5
oooh...i liked this a lot...great imagery..it gave me chills...great job!
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Fear.
Apr 18, 2004 6:42:43 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 18, 2004 6:42:43 GMT -5
Thanks for all your comments!
Hannah.
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Fear.
Apr 19, 2004 22:23:58 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Apr 19, 2004 22:23:58 GMT -5
I like the comparision in the final lines of fear to a murdered corpse.
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Fear.
Apr 20, 2004 4:07:37 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 20, 2004 4:07:37 GMT -5
Thanks for your comments!
Hannah.
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Fear.
Apr 21, 2004 4:56:04 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 21, 2004 4:56:04 GMT -5
oooh... i like... but it made me hungry though...
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Fear.
Apr 21, 2004 5:36:59 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 21, 2004 5:36:59 GMT -5
Hehe, thanks for your comments, always good to get a response!
Hannah.
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Fear.
May 7, 2004 3:06:24 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 3:06:24 GMT -5
niiiiiiiiiiice work, really enjoyed the pictures you lay out for us! x rinna x
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Fear.
May 7, 2004 4:24:26 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on May 7, 2004 4:24:26 GMT -5
Thanks, glad u enjoyed!
Hannah.
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