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Mar 21, 2004 17:22:50 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2004 17:22:50 GMT -5
You sick, morbid sadistic creature, defying the laws of humanity and biting upon souls like the reaper you are- did you think you could just leave me here, crying and dying? Waiting for your embrace once more, cold as it is, painful as it is, you left me standing here. Insecurties leak in every space of air, wishing to be where you are, you ugly soul. Whole pieces of my heart-they're shattered and crushed and stomped upon, because you, my reaper, my bringer of death, brought it upon me.
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And no, it isn't about someone wanting their love back. =P It's actually about someone discarding their true selves, their true greed and selfish desires, and deciding that they can't live without them. That it owns them. And yeahhh.
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Mar 21, 2004 17:34:17 GMT -5
Post by leash on Mar 21, 2004 17:34:17 GMT -5
very strong begining lines. i love the emotion in this piece.. powerful write, black aura-sama.
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unknown
Mar 22, 2004 10:46:22 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Mar 22, 2004 10:46:22 GMT -5
wonderful piece...and i really like your message behind it...too many times when change an inner piece of ourselves to conform to what others expect us to be...unfortunately you can sometimes do that to the extent that you forgot it was ever there...anyway i'm done blabbing..so i'm going to say, once again, that this was a wonderful piece...keep up the great work
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unknown
Mar 23, 2004 14:53:39 GMT -5
Post by The Bathroom Poet on Mar 23, 2004 14:53:39 GMT -5
This was funny, and scary, cool!
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Mar 23, 2004 15:30:55 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Mar 23, 2004 15:30:55 GMT -5
Mmm. Thanks for all the comments. Appreciate it. (Really, it inflates my ego =P)
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Apr 17, 2004 3:25:42 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 3:25:42 GMT -5
This sounded really angry to me at least. It had a nice power to it and strength too.
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Apr 19, 2004 6:39:17 GMT -5
Post by kt on Apr 19, 2004 6:39:17 GMT -5
raw and angry, good stuff! Did it make you feel better when you put your feelings into words?
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