Devil's Kiss

[Alex'z Death Chic]

You entice them with your resplendent fantasies
feeding words to their mouths, they feast on your lies
your own mouth, the fount of sin from which they they drink
the fount that makes them slowly forget to rely on the angels above
only dependent on your intoxicating seduction
ethereal, you make yourself seem to be in their eyes
erudite, you appear before them at all times
they take in you lies like an endless, flowing river
until it becomes the very air of which they breathe
until it has rotten their souls and blackened their hearts
but I will not be one of them, addicted to your bliss
I am not stupid to fall for your spurious facade
I can walk away from your charms and deny you of satisfaction and feel nothing
for I will never succumb to the devil's kiss.

[John Barnett]

This was awesome, I loved this, great job!

[bloodredtears]

wonderful piece here...i really enjoyed it...especially the last to lines..great job...keep up the good work!

[Alex'z Death Chic]

wow. I'm glad you both like it... Lately, my muse has been the devil. I dunno why though.... oh, thanks bye. heh.

[Eclipse]

i like it too! hehe. another awesome write.

[SilverEyes]

Great piece, I love the descriptions.

[leash]

excellent work, alexs death chick. captivating.

i really liked the mood/atmosphere in this piece.. pleasantly dark. the rhythm really helped carry your readers interest along.. the flow was great!

keep it up. i look forward to reading more of your work.