Bloodlust

[Alex'z Death Chic]

Crimson eyes peer at me through my window
lurking in the shadows, hidden beneath the darkness
its looming in the night, avoiding the moonlight
perched on a nearby roof, it calculates its next move
waiting for the perfect oppurtunity to strike
eager to slit my throat and taste my blood
stalking me with whispers of gentle, macabre breezes
enticing me with its flawless seduction
with one look at its eyes, I'm under its spell
engulfing me in its embrace as its fangs sink in
suddenly, a surge of passion and desire course through me
like an insatiable hunger burning deep inside of me
it feeds off my blood, causing my heart to weaken its beat
droplets of blood fall upon my lips as well
not my blood that it feeds on but its own
drinking it like wine, I let it intoxicate me with its taste
like a river, it flows through my mouth
pleasing my hunger, I feel the blood in my mouth lessen
as stroking hands begin to take over me, provoking me
struggling, I fall upon its eyes once again
only to gaze upon the eyes of my fellow vampire
inviting me its penetrating stare, it entwines my hand in its own
as we, the children of the night walk in the darkness
driven by the hunger within us, we prowl in your fears
forced to live a whole eternity damned and forsaken
awaiting for this bloodlust to burn out
watching as time ebb and flow
waiting for eternity to end.

[bloodredtears]

i love vampires pieces...because i love vampires..they are very cool! great job!

[Eclipse]

ahh i love vampires too. heh. I liked how you told a story in this. also the description of the vampire in the beginning as an "it" caught my attention. it makes the reader continue on through the piece trying to figure out what "it" is. a dark piece.

[Alex'z Death Chic]

Actually, when I wrote this, I didn't know what "it" was. It was a little later when I decided "it" to be a vampire.

Again, thanks to you both... I feel so flattered... *blushes*

[SilverEyes]

A wonderful piece. I love your descriptions of the hunt.