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Post by leash on Feb 11, 2004 17:03:03 GMT -5

splashing realitys ocean
resist my unshakable force
enter your forbidden essence
purged for so long
quenching my soul
violate the prey
once as beautiful as i
consumed by desire
exploit your shame
and harness whats left
enslave your embrace
make it my command
desecrate your body
emulation your only friend
now lost to the darkness above
subvert enslaved courage
to raw pain
bloody with contempt

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	-desecrate- Feb 11, 2004 18:16:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 11, 2004 18:16:49 GMT -5 "once as beautiful as i" That speaks to me on so many levels.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	-desecrate- Feb 12, 2004 14:19:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 14:19:07 GMT -5 i agree with Silver Eyes, that line really captures me too! good job
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	-desecrate- Feb 12, 2004 20:25:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 12, 2004 20:25:39 GMT -5 the entire piece just blew me away....I really loved it.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

leash Guest	-desecrate- Feb 13, 2004 13:54:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Feb 13, 2004 13:54:15 GMT -5 thanks guys.. this was actually one of my first poems, so i am especially proud of it.

Sathien Guest	-desecrate- Feb 13, 2004 21:22:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Feb 13, 2004 21:22:44 GMT -5 wow, really smooth flow.. it's like i'm reading through the poem and images just keep on showing themselves with each line read.. 'tis really good. my favorite line was, as with the others: once as beautiful as i that was a killer. well done!

Post by leash on Feb 11, 2004 17:03:03 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 11, 2004 18:16:49 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 14:19:07 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 12, 2004 20:25:39 GMT -5

Post by leash on Feb 13, 2004 13:54:15 GMT -5

Post by Sathien on Feb 13, 2004 21:22:44 GMT -5