Creature of the night

Stray
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4 out of 5 voices in my head say go back to sleep

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Creature of the night Jan 17, 2004 13:37:14 GMT -5

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Post by Stray on Jan 17, 2004 13:37:14 GMT -5

A figure,
black as night,
walks ever so softly,
in the shadows from the light,
silently jumping from roof,
to roof,
like an agile jungle cat,
a blood thirsty animal,
is no more that a person,
a thing,
part bat,
part cat,
part human,
this creature!
no different from a mere rock,
alone,
cold,
heartless,
emotionless,
bloodlust takes over it's body like a cool breeze,
on an autmn day,
this creature of the night,
living on blood,
a Vampire.

I only live,
i cannot die,
my voice only in,
this lifeless eye,

My skin like ice,
my tears of dead soul,
fresh blood tastes,
warm and nice,

I am alone,
i live to wander,
i have no home,
or one to plunder,

i am dead.
i am the one,
Stray

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Creature of the night Jan 17, 2004 13:42:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 17, 2004 13:42:48 GMT -5 vampires are awesome...this is a very good piece...i really enjoyed reading it!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Stray Novice 4 out of 5 voices in my head say go back to sleep Posts: 4	Creature of the night Jan 17, 2004 17:50:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Stray on Jan 17, 2004 17:50:02 GMT -5 THANK YOU!!
	I only live, i cannot die, my voice only in, this lifeless eye, My skin like ice, my tears of dead soul, fresh blood tastes, warm and nice, I am alone, i live to wander, i have no home, or one to plunder, i am dead. i am the one, Stray

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Creature of the night Jan 18, 2004 1:38:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 18, 2004 1:38:27 GMT -5 Wonderful description, you really bring the undead to "life".
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Stray Novice 4 out of 5 voices in my head say go back to sleep Posts: 4	Creature of the night Jan 18, 2004 18:26:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Stray on Jan 18, 2004 18:26:23 GMT -5 ;D yay! thank you!
	I only live, i cannot die, my voice only in, this lifeless eye, My skin like ice, my tears of dead soul, fresh blood tastes, warm and nice, I am alone, i live to wander, i have no home, or one to plunder, i am dead. i am the one, Stray

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Creature of the night May 12, 2004 1:01:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 12, 2004 1:01:10 GMT -5 vampires mystify me, great poem! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Creature of the night

Post by Stray on Jan 17, 2004 13:37:14 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 17, 2004 13:42:48 GMT -5

Post by Stray on Jan 17, 2004 17:50:02 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 18, 2004 1:38:27 GMT -5

Post by Stray on Jan 18, 2004 18:26:23 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 12, 2004 1:01:10 GMT -5