Vampire

[SilverEyes]

Ah, the late night inspiration.

Vampire, vampire of the night
Is it my blood you want before first light?
Take me, take me in the dark
Give to me your two pronged mark
Kill me, kill me I wouldn’t mind
I’ll be the most willing victim you’ll ever find
Drain me, drain me of my life
I won’t give you any strife
But
You’ll have to share your immortality
And guide me in the endless night

[leash]

this sounds very much like blakes poem "tyger, tyger."

[bloodredtears]

very very interesting...the repetition at the beginning of the lines is great! good job!

[SilverEyes]

Thanks!

[T.J. Barber]

I'm quite fond of the vampyre story. They're so mysterious. They have a way of making anything written about them sound eerie and scary. This was a very good write. Keep it up!