Avatre
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Just around for the words...^.^
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Post by Avatre on Jan 8, 2004 16:20:58 GMT -5
When You Sleep
All is dressed in silver In the dark night Tips of wolf fur Glow of the moonlight
Sky's dark velvet Black tinged with blue A silence reigns the darkness All old becomes new
A shroud of mystery Drapes upon the air Look and listen around To what is there
Soft are the trees' murmers Words of truth told Listen closely Learn tales of old
Listen to the darkness Hear the phoenix's song Watch the Elves' melody drift Reminding you don't belong
In this quiet night Where werewolves roam Only to find vampires Following you home
The night's mysteries Are not for those weak You many not even find What it is you seek
Wait until dawn Take a look around We, with the dark Will all be gone.
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Post by leash on Jan 8, 2004 16:57:04 GMT -5
that first line really caught my attention.. just the image of "all is dressed in silver" seemed to take me to another place. i found it very easy to visualize everything in your poem.
cool write.. thank you for sharing it.
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 8, 2004 17:21:05 GMT -5
i agree...this is very easy to picture...and i really like what i see...good job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 22, 2004 18:12:24 GMT -5
This is just beautiful. I almost can't pick out a favorite stanza but the first, fourth, and fifth are my personal favorites. Well, I love the second stanza too. ;D
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