-cranial tissues-

[leash]

black painted lips
hot tar
leaking down her soul
maggots gnawing at her rotting insides
"scrumptious,"
they moan.
pearly white wriggling creatures
mass in her brain,
eating away at the useless tissue.
"she was never the brightest..
.. or was she?"
misused beauty.
for evil..
for the seduction of..
for the seduction of..?
broken memory.
fragments slipping.
splintered thoughts.
slowly,
so slowly
they gnaw,
silently eating the cranial tissues
of an evil mind.



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thanks for reading.

[bloodredtears]

interesting....very good piece...i enjoyed reading it alot

[SilverEyes]

This is wonderfully descriptive with all of the morbid details. It reminds me of the cyborg bear, Shardik, in Stephen King's The Waste Lands.

[leash]

thanks for the feedback.. much appreciated.

ooh.. i havent read that yet. i think ill look into it.

[Deleted]

It's... interesting. Morbid, yes, but in a way that keeps you captivated and reading until the end. Keep it up.

[Eclipse]

very dark and deep. it really keeps your attention. i love the way you describe things. awesome write.

[leash]

thank you both. im happy you enjoyed it.

[Beskhu3epnm]

That's good. I like the occasional repetition and the structure of the poem in general.

[Sathien]

yet again, a wonderful write! i like this.. it felt... i dunno.. REAL. it's as if.. i may have said those words sometime someplace somewhere or... somebody else might have. or.. it's just, all natural. but of course, the copyright is totally yours, dear. ;D