Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
Posts: 411
|
Post by Seth on Apr 1, 2005 14:35:51 GMT -5
A collaboration poem by myself and my younger cousin. In Your Eyes
I look in your eyes, But you are blind- To the pain & agony I'm dying in. Crying tears, searching for solice But, I seem to find only Emptiness.
I cry at night, through the darkness. Cowering from the Light That shines outside my window. But my soul ascends the bright Leaving my body and heart behind. And I stay, doing nothing.
I feel something rusting, rotting: corroding in the end. I find that I am busting open; Imploding in my empty misery. I look in your eyes, Crying my tears of tragedy & fear, But you are too blinded By your faslified lies...
|
|
|
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 2, 2005 14:52:03 GMT -5
Hey, Seth...uhhhh...I think that this poem, was really touching and heart felt. It would almost make you wanna cry to think about someone with that cold of a heart. I'm not sure who you are referring to but, i'm sure whomever it is, if they could read this poem and read how you felt, they would change thier ways...
Awesome write,
TJ
|
|
|
Post by Cadre on May 30, 2005 10:54:18 GMT -5
Wow, this was very heartfelt. I could relate to it alot, and the phrasing just made it that much stronger.
|
|