Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Post by Horn on Jun 1, 2004 17:25:02 GMT -5
My Family I love you so much Yet I hate you so You give me all that I want, Yet I have nothing at all You give me life, I can let out, Yet I am dying in this dark, dismal prison of fear You push me to be the greatest, Yet I have a different idea of greatness You know the most about me, Yet you know nothing at all You give me the love I need, But you suffocate me, the prisoner
I need to get out of here, I need to left alone, Be myself by myself, I can be my own best hated friend; Just give me some room to breathe
I need to take the shackles off, The heavy ones that my family put so tightly around me
I want to just fly, fly fly Far away, soar in the sky If this bird falls, I know You will try to pick me up, The only ones who would care Yet if I fall, Let me fall
I can not bear to let my True thoughts out To scar you forver; If you really knew me, You would hate me
You are why I keep going; Yet I need to find a path By myself until I figure out my bearings, For I am quite lost
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jun 5, 2004 1:58:26 GMT -5
You push me to be the greatest, Yet I have a different idea of greatness I can not bear to let my True thoughts out To scar you forver; If you really knew me, You would hate me You are why I keep going; Yet I need to find a path By myself until I figure out my bearings, For I am quite lost This is truly an amazing write. Each line is something most teenagers can relate to, I swear... It really is one the truest and greatest writes I've read here.
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Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Post by Horn on Jun 6, 2004 11:09:51 GMT -5
Thank you, I appreciate it alot.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 7, 2004 20:00:38 GMT -5
Horn, honey i know the feeling too well. x rinna x
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