Congratulations

[Alex'z Death Chic]

I've had a taste of happiness
and I must say, its sweeter without deceit
I knew it wasn't gonna last forever
but I never expected it to end this way
when it hit me, it hit me hard
had to bite my tongue to keep from screaming
roll my fists tightly to keep from hitting something
and cry my heart out to keep from killing myself
didn't see it coming, thanks for the surprise
just to let you know, you broke my heart
congratulations, you good for nothing liar!

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

ADC,

this hurts. succinct has always been your friend. well done.

rinna

[T.J. Barber]

WOW!!

I know exactly how you feel. That is an almost exact replica of a much longer poem I wrote intitled " GOOD FOR NOTHING" I loved the harsh reality and true emotion you threw out of your soul..I could feel it burning and searing into my flesh.....awesome write..
Tj

[Seth]

Hm, is this but the conclusion of all lost relationships? Nicely written, the emotion and feel really comes out through this.