To Father.

[Mobious]

      To Father.

Father, thy Elder.
You raised me.
I turned out fine, I think.
I learned from,
your mistakes, my mistakes,
our mistakes.
I turned out fine, so one would say.
But Elder, thy Father.
What made me learn,
made me do as thou say.
Out of respect.
Out of fear.
Doesn't matter now, does it.
I learned from thou,
thy ways, thou doings.
And all I can say,
is I learned from us.
I turned out fine, so I say.
And you would say what.
I say Forgiven,
Father,
Forgiven.

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[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

forgiveness is a really tough thing to dish out, i'm glad you could come to this conclusion with your father. this was sad, but well written.
x rinna x

[Seth]

A fantastic closing... Truly a remarkable write here...