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terrified Apr 28, 2004 22:45:31 GMT -5

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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:45:31 GMT -5

Problem after f*cking problem
My past is always haunting
Never stopping to let me breathe
Now I am at peace with my life
I am happy and I am healthy
In my past I thought I would always
Embrace the ice cold touch of death
Now I am scared
Everything to live for and
Everything to lose
Destiny wills all of us to pass
I don't want to leave
I've just found what it means
To be alive
No longer just a passing thought
It consumes me in everything I do
How long do I have to tell you
You made me whole

'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	terrified May 4, 2004 11:10:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 11:10:11 GMT -5 this is a very intersting piece...it didn't really tie into the forum until the very end...but i really liked it..and how you ended it! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	terrified May 4, 2004 18:26:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:26:38 GMT -5 bloodread, thanks for reading, yeah this one ended up quite lovely. i was pondering my mortality, my morality and my sins and if maybe some Eye in the Sky will take me earlier than I'd like. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Brady Kyler Novice Posts: 46	terrified May 5, 2004 12:08:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brady Kyler on May 5, 2004 12:08:20 GMT -5 Very good
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Horn Novice Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us Posts: 66	terrified May 5, 2004 12:11:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Horn on May 5, 2004 12:11:11 GMT -5 well lol, I especially like this one too... But this one especially... I hope the poem is true for me too
	"The mind is a prison which torments until the day you die. One can only escape this meaningless life by embracing the eternal dreamless sleep that we call death." -Me

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	terrified May 5, 2004 23:40:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 5, 2004 23:40:14 GMT -5 bk, horn, thank you for reading. horn, i hope you find my ending in your life too. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:45:31 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 11:10:11 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:26:38 GMT -5

Post by Brady Kyler on May 5, 2004 12:08:20 GMT -5

Post by Horn on May 5, 2004 12:11:11 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 5, 2004 23:40:14 GMT -5