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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Oct 2, 2004 16:16:42 GMT -5
They say the past can be undone
and for you it can be
just pull the trigger of the gun
and forget all about me.
The love that we shared
the times that we spent
the tears that were cried
out the window it all went
The past can be forgotten
by you alone
but im forced to remember
and turn my heart to stone.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Oct 7, 2004 9:49:35 GMT -5
breaking up is hard to do... well done, ALABS, it's great to read you.  rinna |
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Post by bloodredtears on Oct 12, 2004 21:40:28 GMT -5
very well written...the rhyming is good! i love the first stanza! it always seems easier to be forgotten than to forget! great job!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Oct 17, 2004 0:07:13 GMT -5
Well written, I know how you feel and I wish you all the best of luck in pushing this out of your mind...
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Post by Seth on Oct 23, 2004 16:50:44 GMT -5
Hm, the old-never-ending requiem... Your flow and wording is wonderfully written, as well as your emotion.
Nicely written, if only such painful memories didn't happen so often.
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