NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Quiet
Apr 17, 2004 22:19:41 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2004 22:19:41 GMT -5
as the room becomes quiet
all the children retire
the darkness descends
streets grow so empty
this is the time
when the rain falls loud
A time for walking
talking and memories
holding you close
as the rain wets you hair
and the silence grows louder
your thoughts are so clear
time has run rampant
stealing dreams, desires
it stowed away hope
replaced it with order
now the rain falls again
the streets are so quiet
and thoughts once so loud
ring silent in the night
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Quiet
Apr 17, 2004 23:26:55 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 23:26:55 GMT -5
I don't know what to say about this piece. Well, it's a beautiful piece and I felt myself drawn in. I can't really describe it. Oh well.
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Quiet
Apr 18, 2004 0:09:18 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 18, 2004 0:09:18 GMT -5
wonderful piece...i too was drawn in...great job!
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Quiet
May 3, 2004 21:58:27 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 21:58:27 GMT -5
this created a dark cold image in my head, with myself cradling my daughter, the only warmth she has. nice work!
x rinna x
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