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Post by Brady Kyler on Apr 6, 2004 19:50:33 GMT -5
I never meant to hurt you The last thing I want to do Is bring you pain And tears like rain Came pouring down With no sound It's all my fault I should have faught Like a lion To protect you But I failed And you fell And hurt yourself along the way I'm haunted everyday By my mistakes You were at stake I'm just thankful you're okay It's hard for me to say But I love you I really do And I'm sorry I'll always be here for you When you need me From this moment on
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 20:07:24 GMT -5
This is a great poem Brady, welcome to Poet Club, it's great to have you back among us. If my memory is correct, isn't this the one you wrote for your sister Kristen?
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 7, 2004 2:35:47 GMT -5
i love this piece...the first line reminded me of the song they play on "Look Who's Talking Too" Great movie awesome song.....great job!
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 12, 2004 15:43:55 GMT -5
Braden, this is one of your finest my friend, it's good to have you back with us here at Poet Club. Hope to see ya around more!
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 14, 2004 16:04:39 GMT -5
Yeah Brady, good to see you again man, great write also. Welcome back!
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Post by Brady Kyler on Apr 14, 2004 18:21:41 GMT -5
Yeah this is the one I wrote for Kris when she had that accident a few years ago. Thanks for all of the comments and replies.
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 2:47:22 GMT -5
Potent imagery, it compliments your message very well and it's beautifully and contritely expressive.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 22:29:16 GMT -5
this IS love. mistakes are meant to be made, learnt from, then moved on from. i've never come across your work here before, but welcome back and i look forward to reading some more of your work! x rinna x
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