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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Sept 24, 2004 22:24:15 GMT -5
The wounds are still fresh so much easier for you to make me bleed inflict more pains that weren't there before shower me with honestly no more lies and maybe... just maybe all my insecurities will go away....
Tell me you were never mine coz you never truly were how could you have been when i had you but two other girls also had your heart
So tell me if I chose the wrong decision because I know I didn't I'd rather lose you than lose my sanity over my insecurities....
to the bastard who broke my heart, Alex.
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Post by bloodredtears on Sept 25, 2004 21:31:48 GMT -5
what an asshole...kick him! this piece shows the pain well, good job!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Sept 25, 2004 22:27:43 GMT -5
Love will break your heart, and the men and women who do it should rot for it, but it happens, good luck girlfriend and kick his ass!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 26, 2004 5:25:32 GMT -5
nothing like a freshly scorned heart to get the muse going. this was great, ADC. sorry, i had a laugh out loud at the title and your username.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:15:51 GMT -5
Yes you're feelings and anger pour beautifully and clearly throughout this. Awesome write, really gets me pumped up.
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