Sisters

Celestial
Novice

Celestial.Photographer.Poet.

Posts: 72

Sisters Feb 28, 2004 16:21:44 GMT -5

Quote

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:21:44 GMT -5

I was just thinking of my sister and my female friends and this resulted.

Sisters
What does the word mean
Blood related females
Of the same parents?

No, it means more...
It means loyality
An unbreakable bond
Between females

Someone we can relate to
Someone who cares about us
She'll say if it looks right or not
She'll tell me what's needed

Sisters
They are more than just blood
They are like diamonds
Special jewels in our life
They are forever

~ Sisters ~
By CAB 2004

Yeah, it's a bomb.
Yes, it's lit.
Yes, you better run for your life.
:: insert evil laughter here ::

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Sisters Feb 28, 2004 16:47:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 28, 2004 16:47:36 GMT -5 very good I like your style and I am sure you will benifit from this site, please reply to others celestial you have put on about eight poems today. take care and good luck Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Sisters Feb 28, 2004 21:59:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:59:04 GMT -5 this is really true. i dont have any sisters, only two brothers, so my really good friends are like the sisters i never had!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Sisters Feb 29, 2004 1:56:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 1:56:53 GMT -5 I enjoyed the last stanza the most. It gives a value that is comparitive(but not really) to the greatest people in our lives. Nice write.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Celestial Novice Celestial.Photographer.Poet. Posts: 72	Sisters Feb 29, 2004 14:28:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Celestial on Feb 29, 2004 14:28:45 GMT -5 thanks for the replies and richie, I'm sorry for posting all eight of mine in one day. I didn't see the post three a day thing. So sorry. I shall know for next time. Thanks again, guys
	Yeah, it's a bomb. Yes, it's lit. Yes, you better run for your life. :: insert evil laughter here ::

bloodredtears
Legend

I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

Posts: 1,164

Sisters Feb 29, 2004 14:40:16 GMT -5

Quote

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 14:40:16 GMT -5

it's three in a forum per day, you can post more than three, just give equal attention to the other poets on the boards, because we are all here to share our poetry.....

this is a wonderful poem..you have much talent...its great having friends like that!

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Sisters May 6, 2004 0:56:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 0:56:18 GMT -5 very bittersweet for me. i'm glad you have that sisterhood in your life... x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:21:44 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 28, 2004 16:47:36 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:59:04 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 1:56:53 GMT -5

Post by Celestial on Feb 29, 2004 14:28:45 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 14:40:16 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 0:56:18 GMT -5