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Support Feb 28, 2004 16:20:56 GMT -5

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Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:20:56 GMT -5

This is another poem for my best friend.

Don't cry
No, not anymore
I'm here now
Everything will be okay

Put your trust in me
And I'll take your sorrow
I'll take your nightmares
I'll take your pain

Just to see you smile again
I'd take it all
If that'd make it better
If that'd make you happy

So just let it all out
Let me help
I promise all will be okay
Time is with us...

No need for tears anymore
Not for pain, sorrow, or nightmares
Because I've taken them all away
To keep you safe

~ Support ~
By CAB 2004

Yeah, it's a bomb.
Yes, it's lit.
Yes, you better run for your life.
:: insert evil laughter here ::

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Support Feb 28, 2004 21:57:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:57:45 GMT -5 once again, nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Support Feb 29, 2004 1:46:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 1:46:23 GMT -5 I like the simple diction of the piece and the strength I see in it. I love the last stanza, nice write.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Support May 6, 2004 1:06:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 1:06:19 GMT -5 this was beautiful, i thoroughly enjoyed it! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:20:56 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:57:45 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 1:46:23 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 1:06:19 GMT -5