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[sweetest17sin]

Why do you feel that you can do this?
What do you think gives you the right?
What did I ever do to deserve it?
Why do I deserve to be pushed out of your life?
Is this really what you want?
Do you really mean to hurt me the way you do?
Would you like to feel unwanted and forgotten?
Or how about heartbroken and used?
Somehow I’m guessing you wouldn’t
No one likes to be treated unfair
But the more I think about it
The more I realize you don’t care
I don’t know you anymore
You’re not the girl you used to be
IF only you would try to understand
If you only cared to see
But only one person matters to you now
I thought a boy would never come between your friends
But now if you’re not with him
It’s like the world will come to an end
I’m so sick of this
I just can’t take it anymore
When he’s not around then I’m good enough
Sorry, but that’s not worth sticking around for
Even when we do hang out
When you can’t be with him
Things just aren’t the same
And they never will be again
I wish you saw how things are
And missed how things used to be
I wish someone other then him mattered to you
I wish that someone was me

[bloodredtears]

that's a really good piece...it's tough when a friendship goes to crap over a guy! good job!

[Persephone]

A potent tirade. I hope this eased things for you.

[Celestial]

oh very nice. I felt this way a few times but shortly got over them. I understand what you're saying. Very nice. Very very nice.

[richie]

I like this melissa, like a good peformance poem reading it slow -aload it is very powerful
excellent Richie.

[SilverEyes]

Powerful write. I like how your emotions turned from anger to a sad lonliness.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

excellent work describing the myriad of emotions involved with a friendship breakdown. enjoyed!
x rinna x