sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:34:05 GMT -5
There are very few people that you can really call a “friend” Who are always by your side and will be there ‘til the end Who can always make you laugh cheer you up when you are sad And make things ten times better when life isn’t going so bad They’re the ones you’ll never forget even if you two are to part Because if that has to happen they’ll always be in your heart It’s hard to imagine life without them by your side Just the thought of it makes you want to cry I know a girl who fits this to a T She’s this rare angel That’s been sent from heaven to me She’s what you call a true friend something extremely rare And this girl is you thanks for always being there
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 10:41:53 GMT -5
a very nice poem for you friend...good job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 23:49:35 GMT -5
Aww, great poem. I'm sure she appreciates it.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 20:50:02 GMT -5
another wonderful piece...just some words of encouragement, i haven't read anything you wrote that i haven't liked! keep it up
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
Posts: 252
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 21:14:13 GMT -5
aw thanks!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 7:11:35 GMT -5
Melissa, Great poem,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 23, 2004 20:10:06 GMT -5
Great Job! I enjoyed every line.
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Celestial
Novice
Celestial.Photographer.Poet.
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Post by Celestial on Feb 29, 2004 14:17:01 GMT -5
Every line of this is so right. I enjoyed it very much
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 19:47:19 GMT -5
She’s this rare angel That’s been sent from heaven to me
a relationship where you feel like that is gold. well done! x rinna x
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