sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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MOM
Feb 12, 2004 1:31:54 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:31:54 GMT -5
A mom’s someone who loves you unconditionally, a best friend who’s always there. A mom’s the one you run to, when things seem so unfair.
She’s the one who comforts you when you cry, the one that makes everything alright. She’s the one to take all of your troubles, and throw them out of sight.
She loves to see you happy, And supports you in all you do. After all she’s your biggest fan, There’s nothing she wouldn’t do for you.
She taught you all you know, “like mother like daughter,” people say. And as much as you hate to admit it, you become more like her everyday.
The bond that you two share, is one that’s like no other. For no one can ever replace, the love between you and your mother.
So, Mom, on this Mother’s Day, there’s a few things I want you to know. And all of them are true, even if they don’t all always show.
I look up to, and admire you. You’re the greatest woman I’ll ever know. You’re my best friend, and I hope our relationship continues to grow.
I’d be lost without you, I wouldn’t know what to do. There isn’t anything you wouldn’t do for me, and I thank you for all you do.
We have our disagreements, there’s times I’m angry with you. But one thing that never changes, is how much I love you.
Many kids aren’t as privileged as me, to have a mom like you. And mom just like you’re proud of me, I’m proud to call you mom, and also proud of you.
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MOM
Feb 12, 2004 10:46:08 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 10:46:08 GMT -5
you were right...most kids aren't that lucky...i'm glad you respect your mom so much...it doesn't happen often good poem...
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MOM
Feb 13, 2004 17:03:29 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 17:03:29 GMT -5
Definitely a sweet write. I'm lucky to have that kind of relationship with my mom.
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MOM
Feb 20, 2004 14:40:54 GMT -5
Post by richie on Feb 20, 2004 14:40:54 GMT -5
I liked this very much the rhyme shows up well and you get your point over at the start well writern take care Richie.
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MOM
Feb 23, 2004 6:45:43 GMT -5
Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 6:45:43 GMT -5
Melissa, This is a Great poem and reads easy,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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MOM
Feb 24, 2004 15:16:49 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 15:16:49 GMT -5
This was very nice, very beautiful.
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
Posts: 252
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MOM
Feb 26, 2004 22:26:12 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:26:12 GMT -5
thanks all for the replies!
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Celestial
Novice
Celestial.Photographer.Poet.
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MOM
Feb 29, 2004 14:21:49 GMT -5
Post by Celestial on Feb 29, 2004 14:21:49 GMT -5
"We have our disagreements, there’s times I’m angry with you. But one thing that never changes, is how much I love you. "
That is the deepest stanza in this poem I think for it hits me so deeply. I'm on the verge of tears because I see so much meaning in this poem and I see that my relationship with my mother isn't the greatest and I wish it were more. I see many of the things in here are true to me as well and I love how you wrote this. I hope your mom sees how much you care about her and I'm happy for you thatyou have such a great relationship. Cheers to you.
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MOM
May 3, 2004 22:41:22 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 22:41:22 GMT -5
this is: 1. a fantastic tribute to your mother 2. a closeness i've never had with my own mother 3. what i aspire to become in my life, a mother with balance to be a mother and a friend to Charlotte, my girl. 4. a most envious relationship you have. x rinna x
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