Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 7, 2004 18:48:00 GMT -5
I love you...the stars shining in your eyes...how i love your eyes, o how i love you I want you, i want your mind, your soul, your body is so hot...I need YOU, need me as our bodies entangle our eyes meet, and i see the lust in them, your love... In the bed...to the floor....to my heart...to my soul...i can star in your eyes forever and i want to...will you be mine, and i will be yours...i want you, WANT ME our arms coming to eachothers backs, rubbing like we are cold and wet all i am is hot and soaked, soaked in your sweet sweat mixed with mine how can i not love you, i see sweat slipping down your cheek, so i lick it up... i move down from you face....
This is for and inspired by my new true friend, she helps me write and has been my muse lately
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Nov 29, 2004 15:37:51 GMT -5
This is both sexy, yet sweet at the same time. Nice combo!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 29, 2004 20:03:15 GMT -5
Very interesting, I enjoyed the intensity of this piece. It was indeed very "HOT" for lack of a better word. I indeed enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work!
TJ
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Post by nevadasky on Nov 30, 2004 10:20:07 GMT -5
very provocative and sensual...great write!
nevadasky
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Dec 2, 2004 12:30:27 GMT -5
This is absolutely awesome! Love the feel and steamy intensity in this, truly a wonderful, cool piece. Lovely done! And here I thought guys only cared about the sex part... [/i]
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
Posts: 97
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 9:07:11 GMT -5
LOL thanks for the comments guys!
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