Sorry my love

[alostandbrokensoul]

heavens crying tonight
making my winshield blurry
and washing the blood from my hands.
i cant remember why im in a hurry

I wake to confusion
sirens all around
the neighborhoods flooded
theres people in crowds.

They bring out a body
and place it in the ambluance
I see his mother
crying for Lance

I know that house
ive been there before
it was my boyfriends
till he shut the door.

Im sorry my love
but you were mine
and when you left me
I took your life.

[bloodredtears]

woo, bloody! good job! i really liked it a lot...last stanza was definitely my favorite!

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

you sure do love your heady pieces, eh? well done.

[Seth]

Ooh, too awesome. The ending was way to cool.