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island phantasm Jun 22, 2004 3:28:06 GMT -5

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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 22, 2004 3:28:06 GMT -5

Utopia is ours
The days are lustful
Idle time spent infatuated
Notions of logic thrown carelessly
To be buried in the sand

The twilight scorching
Our trysts unadulterated
No need to be anywhere else
The solution to my wanderlust
Is here with you

'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

angel Guest	island phantasm Jun 22, 2004 14:12:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by angel on Jun 22, 2004 14:12:20 GMT -5 aaaaaah that is cool. This flows extremely well too. Made me go in a different train of thought. kudos for you

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	island phantasm Jun 22, 2004 17:41:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 22, 2004 17:41:50 GMT -5 invisible, thank you very much, sweetheart!
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

desecration Novice Posts: 29	island phantasm Jul 22, 2004 3:06:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by desecration on Jul 22, 2004 3:06:06 GMT -5 simple and very effective. it describes love amazingly well.
	Too many die before the grave, screaming for help that is lost among the whispers of the wind. Too many souls are flayed and hung as reminders that are ignored. Too many promises are extinguished and forgotten.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	island phantasm Jul 22, 2004 20:18:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 22, 2004 20:18:57 GMT -5 thank you very much, desecration. x r x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	island phantasm Aug 23, 2004 18:30:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Aug 23, 2004 18:30:50 GMT -5 This is great, very nice
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 22, 2004 3:28:06 GMT -5

Post by angel on Jun 22, 2004 14:12:20 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 22, 2004 17:41:50 GMT -5

Post by desecration on Jul 22, 2004 3:06:06 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 22, 2004 20:18:57 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Aug 23, 2004 18:30:50 GMT -5