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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 20, 2004 17:07:52 GMT -5
Have you ever felt forever in a night? A one-night stand with emotions as deep as the deepest love of your life. Have you had forever in a night? Have you ever stared deep into someone’s eyes and given heart and soul without a hint of lies. Have you ever felt a touch feather soft upon you thighs And breathed contented whispers softly moaned in sighs Has it ever seemed you’ve dreamed exquisite nerves a tingling racing flames spreading quickly teasing turning mingling and as you muscles tense and a release is gained you wonder was it dream or real your body has it’s needs fulfilled For the wise we understand Nature has no shame.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Jun 20, 2004 18:50:50 GMT -5
Man! I very much enjoyed this!! Althoughit makes me wish dreams were not so real.. and reality would find me for once. This made me think and feel at the same time.. splendid write!
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 20, 2004 19:01:54 GMT -5
Thank you so much..I wrote this 20 years ago at the age of 17..
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Dec 2, 2004 12:35:21 GMT -5
This is the kind of love-type poetry I love. It's not flaunting the emotion of love but yet captures it as I would see it (if I knew it was real). Beautiful, soft.. leaves you feeling nice and content, like a dream... Beautifully done.
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 9:13:59 GMT -5
I do so love the topic of this peice, and the way it was written does not shame it, yet brings it up in a higher state of worship by my heart...great write
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