NeverMore
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Jun 20, 2004 2:13:37 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Jun 20, 2004 2:13:37 GMT -5
soft gentle lights glimmer in the summer heat as fingers cold as ice drift slow and so soft over tender warm skin shivering short hairs rise tall as tiny bumps form all over the warmth of the caress smooths the chill igniting a burning from deep within a passion released with such thunder the gods themselves take stand
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Jun 20, 2004 10:07:55 GMT -5
Post by sterling06 on Jun 20, 2004 10:07:55 GMT -5
Wowsers i enjoyed this very much Nevermore. I liked your description of "fingers cold as ice" and "soft over tender warm skin." Very well written.
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Jun 22, 2004 1:59:45 GMT -5
Post by angel on Jun 22, 2004 1:59:45 GMT -5
i like soft gentle lights, it sets the mood. Nicely written, it made me blush
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Jun 30, 2004 18:48:24 GMT -5
Post by haggardlilelf on Jun 30, 2004 18:48:24 GMT -5
Very nice write
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Jul 7, 2004 22:14:24 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Jul 7, 2004 22:14:24 GMT -5
*smiles* thank you.. it is a grand feeling isn't it?
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