Mobious
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Lust
May 23, 2004 22:03:24 GMT -5
Post by Mobious on May 23, 2004 22:03:24 GMT -5
Lust.
Do you see her¿ Oh, I wish... Wish for this fallen angel, This radiant vision. My mind fills, Floods the sky, Lust for this creature of art, For passionate sex. Oh, the greed. Thinking I need help, For this angelic vision. Oh, the wanting, The need. I'm starving for the dreams, Of memories, This creature of heaven, Of fantasy in reality. What a match, Her and I, Wrapped in silk. Oh, I wish... I see her.
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Lust
Jun 1, 2004 20:06:42 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Jun 1, 2004 20:06:42 GMT -5
Awsome thoughts. A daydream that seems non redundant no matter how often had.
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Lust
Jun 19, 2004 15:07:35 GMT -5
Post by sterling06 on Jun 19, 2004 15:07:35 GMT -5
LUST....This can really hurt and bother one. The need kills you b/c you want the person soo much. This is a great poetry that i can relate to(many times). i liked how you ended it (her and i wrapped in silk), i really like that line b/c in my view its a symbol of two joining as one uniting eachothers emotions and feeling. Very nice write.
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