Negotiations In The Dark

[amelie]

Just one kiss, a touch;
No! Too much. Just one more;
But not sure; yes, there;
Ah! Just there, but scared;
Do you care? No, not there;
Yes I’m aware, but unprepared.
Will you share, or just take?
No! Too much. For pity’s sake!
Ah! Another touch; there.
It’s all too much, no;
Just say you care; I’ll believe.
No! Please don’t leave;
Don’t go! I’ll give more;
Just need to be sure.
I know you need, I know;
Oh please don’t go!
I need too. I need to know;
To know you care;
Ah! There, yes, there.
I need to know,
But just don’t care.
Ah!. Yes, there,
And there;
Anywhere.

[Eclipse]

i really liked how this is almost someone having a silent argument with theirselves. jumbled thoughts. i like it. nice write melis.

[angel]

ha i know the feeling. This was enjoyable to read, very nicely written and I like the unique writing style

[haggardlilelf]

This is an excellent description of an argument with ones self, as said above. But I agree. Good work.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Melis, I love the self-conflict role here and the "ah, yes there" sequence left me hot and bothered, very good sweetheart!