JC4life
Novice
Sometimes people are more than they seem. Try looking past appearance.
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Post by JC4life on May 9, 2004 14:25:49 GMT -5
Am I actually posting in this forum? LOL! This is a new thing for me... so please laugh with and not at me Sarah Slowly swaying with the music It keeps perfect time with us I can hear loud noises Softly playing in the background But my attention’s aimed at you. Your right hand is on my waist And your left is gently gripping mine Oh how they fit together! It’s as if they are a puzzle Only complete when our fingers Are linked together My left hand finds the perfect place It rests naturally upon your shoulder. I think my eyes are open But I see you when they’re shut Everybody leaves the room Only we are left I never want the moment to end, But I fear that… It must.
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 11, 2004 23:05:41 GMT -5
moments may end, yet the feeling of that moment will remain as long as you allow it.. Beautifully done *S*
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 12, 2004 14:38:22 GMT -5
This is very good, I really enjoyed your writing here, you did so well!
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JC4life
Novice
Sometimes people are more than they seem. Try looking past appearance.
Posts: 49
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Post by JC4life on May 12, 2004 17:36:12 GMT -5
Thanks guys
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 12, 2004 18:14:59 GMT -5
You are welcome
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