Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 26, 2004 18:47:56 GMT -5
Fingers drawing languid circles Provoke the butterflies resting in my chest. Kissing igniting passion And light flutterings in my breast.
(Hot whispering against the fragile cup of my ear.)
Your touches are lazy and slow. Saying “I’ll just take my time.” And in the end I’m writhing For you to become mine.
(Soft lips casting a warm blush on my chest.)
Your mouth is hot beneath mine. And your hands grasp desperately. I’m diabolic in the sense that I’m Having the effect you had on me.
(I lick the sweat that’s fallen from my brow.)
Foreplay is for torture. And we enjoy the art. But I’m wanting you to take me And pull my thoughts apart.
(My fingernails are digging into the smooth skin of your back.)
Drown me in my senses. Like something lost at sea. Kiss me til I cannot breathe. But please, don’t let me be. (I’m exploding and you’re ignited, Let’s never forget.)
Your lips are against my flesh. And I’m sure I’m blacking out. Show me what you want to say And cast away my doubt.
(And I fall into sleep, dreamless though...I have all that I need here.)
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 4:12:21 GMT -5
all I can say to this is you some how very simply played a movie in my mind with this.. your ability to cause such a visual effect im my mind is awsome! great job!
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:36:22 GMT -5
pretty intense. cool though
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