Sensuality

[kt]

slips slowly caress so gentle a
breathless sigh over stomachs curve
seconds slow and minutes falter
and oh...

skin so soft a sensual whisper
sings so sweetly in my ear:
tease me need me touch me love me
and oh...

silken memories of sunlit pleasures
perfect moments, private treasures
to keep and have to live and hold
and oh...


K x

[BlackRainbow]

I really like this, not to sound picky or anything, but the and oh... kina bothers me after the first one.

[X x K e l Z x X]

the oh's remind me of a song, but the piece was very good, keep it up!